THiiS POEM WAS AMAZiiNG. THE ATTENTiiON TO DETAiiL, THE iiMAGERY THE WAY iiT FLOWED TOGETHER WAS STUNNiiNG. ii LOVED iiT. iiTS ONE OF MY FAVORiiTES. GREAT JOB AND KEEP WRiiTiiNG!!
~SKYE~

Love your creativity, this is an excellent poem mel, love the flow and the imagination, i give it a 5/5 as always, keep them coming babe!!!

This one lost me, but there was a lot of good vacabulary in it. Great job.

I think you message was very vivid, especially the part where you wrote "inspire". I sometimes feel very confused with my creativity. But then, creativity is a bundle of beautiful thoughts unified in one's mind. I see a lot of that here. I'm sure plenty of people are that way and just won't really admit it. 5/5 A very powerful piece!

It was very creative and an amazing write, it was powerful and beautiful. Great work, never stop, great flow, alltogether AWESOME, 5/5

Wow!
This is a truly impressing poem, it is very original and few lines took my breath.
Atmosphere that you created is overwhelming and tone of whole poem is truly intense.
You expressed every emotion on so effective way. I honestly enjoyed in every line and I think that you did superb job with this title.
Ending is also powerful and every description is so vivid.
Beautiful poem! Well done.