Aww, i knw exactly how you feel with this one. great poem, flows great and the words come together so smoothly. great job.

'so maybe i will
I'll get up leave and go,
it wouldn't matter to you anyway
i could be dead for all you no!!!!!!!'

last stanza is fierce. i like it its got attitude but its got feeling.

this feels to me that you tried to hard to write it,...but it is a good poem :]