Comments : Deceiving image

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought this was VERY GOOD. The flow was great, rhyming was perfect. The emotions were all there, like a plea for them all to understand. I really think that there should be a second part to this, so maybe you should write a sequel to this, because the ending just seems a little unfinished. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    Am I what you I am?
    ^ little confused on that one. am I right in guessing you meant "am I what you think I am?" Still overall a good poem. I enjoyed it very much. 5/5