Aawwwwww. sweet

Omg i love it to its co
cool well its ok but still i like it :p
good job 5/5

Great poem... keep up the good work

This is really good. This is one of my favs. Oh and please comment some of my stuff. Keep up the awsome work

Yours truely,

-mello-193-

I liked it. Especially the ending. You can almost see it happening. Short but it has meaning. 5/5

Really good :) i love it.
hehe i havent been on here in forever i stopped writing poems because i was happy now im mad/ sad so might start writing again