Very intriguing piece and a unique rhyme scheme! Makes you think about war and why anyone does it to begin with. You really draw the reader in with your opening question. And your last stanza ends strong as well!
Charisma*

Wow wow wow!!! That was amazing! Forget writer's block honey cause this is incredible. Beautiful piece...definately one of my favorites-not just from you but of all. Keep it up hun! :)
~Jules

I like this because I always hate how they portray war like the men are honorable because they are fighting for a reason, when actually they are risking there lives for men.