Comments : Words a mouth will never speak.

  • The feelings aren't real, or so I think.
    they're but God to Atheists . . .
    not believing what you can't see.

    People have faith in all kinds of things.. Faith is believeing in something you can't see. Question I would have for you is..... do you have faith in the feelings you have? or do you have a war with your head any time you feel these things?

    Anyway, wonderful poem.... this part really got to me,.....

    It's like tears on the cheek,
    of your most cared for friend -
    ripping your insides apart in the end.

    Because any time a friend of mine is crying,,,, I feel like crying too.... just my empathic nature I guess. Great work 5/5