hey nice poem !!! very nicely done ! u must really like this person! it would be sweet to give it to them

Great poem, Catie. Personally, I think you should fix the shorthand and the grammatical errors (or typos). You are missing apostrophes in a lot of your contractions (it's, heart's we'll, I'll) and you also need to capitalize AT LEAST the pronoun "I". I prefer to have the first letter of each line capitalized.... but that's up to each poet, I guess.

I do love the poem...and especially like your repeat of the first stanza!