Comments : Ode to Henry

  • 16 years ago

    by Tony

    Aww poor Henry. Nice job 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lucy Vandenberg

    I like the way this poem leads you on to finish in a really good ending, a chuckler, well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaliza

    Oh wow, i thought you were talking about a real person, lol good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Fran

    Nice work Jackie. I bet you're already in love with your new car though lol.

  • 16 years ago

    by FELTON PHILLIPS

    I loved it. We all need more to smile and laugh about these days.
    Thanks, Jackie.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    So, goodbye dear Henry
    I'll try not to cry
    As you take your final journey
    To the scrap yard in the sky
    ^^^
    I love this ending ... I thought for sure you were writing this about a person ... lol ... very creative twist you've penned in this ode.
    Great read!
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    Well you got me with this poem, as i read through i thought otherwise but in the end i got it all.. Really nice work you showcase in this piece

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    Absolutely wonderful haha
    A true piece of entertainment. I really enjoyed this read

  • 15 years ago

    by Kittens Poems

    Omg, I loved your poem. I laughed.

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Oh, this was so much fun!
    I think you made a really good poem with this, it cracked me up and it was really well written too!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Lol I love this. A poem about a car, very unique. 5/5, Em x