Awww nice poem

U have nice work here keep it up

This is a really nice poem. It had a excellent flow and rhyme to it. A really enjoyable read. :] Nice work. 5/5

This is really good... i loved the concept..

but one thing i suggest is maybe putting it together and not spacing it..

it was kinda hard to read like that.. maybe try a four line stanza type of thing. you know?

but overall i enjoyed it. 5/5