I thought this was so cute. I have so been there before. Keep up the writing you have talent. and don't worry in time you WILL find that special guy. everyones feels the way you do at some point or another.

1. I don't think this is cheesy.
2. I don't understand why anyone would downrate this poem.
Lastly, I think you pointed out some points that a lot of people should think about.

"Why is love so hard to find? I
look around and see couples in
every direction."

Your message was very potent and powerful and couldn't have been said any better. 5/5

This is a very nice piece. and i really like it. itz heartfelt and touching. definitely not cheesy. lol. i feel like this all the time. and it's depressing but all we can do and just try and move on with our days right. . and we'll find the right person when least suspected. :] 5/5.