This is good. really sad. but good.

Wow, just wow. I love this poem 10/5. :) and I hope you keep writing!!!!!!!!!!

Great work! A lot of people who try to write rhyming poems end up sacrificing depth and meaning for the poem but you've done both really well. This is a great poem! Keep up the great work
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Amazing poem! Really well put together! Keep it up!
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Wow amazing poem! 5/5