(: this is grrrreat!
you have awesome potential.
i'm jealous! ;p
but i love it. 5/5

Great poem, beautiful write. makes me realize i have some improving to do. :)

Great work. i really love the rhythm in this poem!!!

I enjoyed this poem, thank you, good read.

Dangg.<3
Love This Poem.
Keep it Up!!!

Beautiful. keep it up! <3

Wow,
that is just beautiful.
i really love it :)
Keep up the good work, i would love to read more.
5/5