This is an awesome poem...its really good. I could kind of relate to it. keep writing 5/5

Thanks a lot...
I can relate to it also..
actually this poem is too old,, i guess im still 16 years old then..
and still, my life is kinda 'unfair'...though.

Good poem. Good use of assonance. I can certainly relate to this. My most recent poems are along the same lines. Please take a look and tell me what you think. 5/5 to you.

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I can relate I like it.