Comments : The Beautiful Game

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    A good poem Mr B, reading it you can imagine yourself there

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Ooooh such sweet seduction. Isn't it awful how women have that sweet innocent way about us. Great write and very intriguing. Enjoyed it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Very nice.