Very good poem.
Damn them dreams!

my only comment is to take out the "!" in all of it.
for some reason it bugged me. and on this stanza
"I looked above and wondered what if?!
I could fly up high to a cloud above a cliff
And dream dreams on that puffy white whiff"

i think it would look and sound better as

"I looked above and wondered, "what if?"
What if I could fly up high to a cloud above a cliff?
And dream dreams on that puffy white whiff?"

that are just my thoughts. but i really enjoyed this.
5/5

Great poem ..
=]

A SUPERB POEM ! I liked it , Life is nothing but mere a pain which soothes our soul when we fall in imaginations and dream something we want but we are stupid fellows as we don't know that imaginations can't exist in reality.
I love this poem 5/5
Biya

I like it.
Good poem!
Take care

Hey i loved the ending so it was a dream after all huh? lol

i have similar poem but didn't post it here yet...wait for it hehe

it was nice poem
keep writting

Zahra, god bless you my dear friend, excellent