NICE WORK, I NEED A DREAM LIKE THIS ONE. LOL!

LOVE THE FLOW

RITE MORE GREAT WORK.

My favorite stanza was the last one. I felt like the first stanza didn't fit in with the rest of the poem. It was longer and, although it still flowed well, the rest of the stanza's were very short and direct. I still give it a 5/5 though