Beautiful

by Avrii Monrielle   Jan 24, 2008


Beautiful

You make me feel beautiful
Glistening, like an ocean
In the sun.
I want to hold you for-
ever until not a single one
Of the stars in the sky
Or clouds in the atmosphere
Are around to hear
Of how much--
How long--
I will wait and wish
With a love so strong
To simply see
Your face
Someday.

You make me feel beautiful,
Like an ocean in the sun.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Thank you :)

  • 16 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I like this poem, its sweet and I love the image of the ocean in the sun... Beautiful.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I like this poem, its sweet and I love the image of the ocean in the sun... Beautiful.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    I really like it :)
    sounds lovey

  • 16 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Oh, wow! Lil sis! this is amazing! breathtaking! oh i have felt this way before, so sweetly so rarely, and you express it so perfectly. wonderful job, i'm so proud of you:)

    imotoosan wa daisuki desu! (i love my lil sis)!

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