Comments : Scattered Dreams

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    In the stanza right before the last it should be your * not you, I believe. Unless I'm reading it wrong.

    The poem is amazing, darling.
    Other than that 'your' it's flawless.
    Amazing.
    Perfect.
    I'm so happy to see something other than a sad/dark poem come out of you. xD
    it's like.
    Refreshing. xD
    Aha.

    You did a wonderful job, darling.
    WonderfulWonderfulWonderful.

    <3