Touching poem.very sad but meaningful.good job conveying your emotion.5/5
Cory

Really good. Should consider making a book out of poems ( a story made out of poems)
5.00/5.00

Hi crystal, thankyou so much for your lovely comment, i put it forward for the praised comment, reduced me to tears...anyway i love this poem, very heartfelt, and your sadness leeks out through your words, losing a loved one is so hard especially in a tragic accident and at such a young age, i truly believe in fate though crystal, he was needed up above that day, he will always be with you though.....stay strong....if you wanted to check out your sad journey and losing you they are dedicated to sam we lost her in october to breast cancer aged 33....