It was awsome. It would be perfect if maybe you changed the last line to:
When all this rain has dried
If you did that, it would rock my socks completly...

-mello

I didn't really like the first stanza because I felt that the rhyme wasn't very stronge, like the in the other stanzas, which was the best thing about them, the rhymes. I would usually write more in depth comments, but I'm feeling a little blank, so sorry.

Brad

P.S. Thank you for commenting on my poem 'Love battles and their fighters' and thank you for putting so much thought it what you said. I can only hope you expressed your true thoughts and not just what you thought I'd like to hear.