Comments : My Hearts Desire

  • 16 years ago

    by RB

    You stroke my cheek,
    you play with my hair.
    It amazes me still,
    how much you care.

    That was just so beautifully expressed.
    Keep up the good work!!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beverlyn

    Wow! I love this poem...great poem..