Really great one Charisma! I like the pace to this poem, and the fact that it isn't too cluttered with words, shorter verses, but still just as powerful. I really liked the 7th stanza:
"It's been so hard to pretend
When I'm breaking down again"
Love it, 5/5!
Aww I know the feeling of a broken heart and it sucks cuz u seem like you are all alone and no one feels ur pain. Its hard to get over bt you will. I'm in the middle of that now. Great poem though 5/5