This is soo amazing. I love it. [:

I really enjoyed reading this poem.

Wow...
This is absolutely mind- blowing and I really can't express how much I like it. Whole poem is excellently written, with amazing descriptions that created truly vivid imagery. I am deeply touched with this piece. You picked great, meaningful topic and wrote priceless sad piece.
Keep writing, you really have a way with words.

WOW! Wow, this is, you literally left me speechless , bravo, this poem posses pure brilliance!
It is really beautiful and so sad in same time, well done, I really can't describe how much you impressed me.
The ending stanza is my favorite one, the ending is so effective and simply fascinating.
Whole piece is very deep and tone that you created in every line is touching.
You should be proud on your self.

Again, great style. 5/5

Well written, I loved your choice of words, 5.5 for sure :)