A very sad poem but its beautiful in its own way

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'Young lovers tied by fate
Young lovers found too late
Tangled together in a peaceful sleep
As the blood flowed from a cut too deep'

This part is really scary.. I love it!! Nyahaha..

Good poem.. i love the begining its really catchy!

Nice poem u got there:) keep up

This poem is soooooo creepy. i love it.

Wow.
this is amazing...
it's beautiful in it's own sad, eery way.
fantastic write! definately 5/5!!