It was good, not great. You gotta work on the form a little and try rhmming a little more. It did have some good visionary though. Just try. You'll get through. And good luck dude

Hit me up anytime bro
-mello-193-

I seriously don't know what mello193 was reading because that poem was absolutely amazing.

Nice write, agian all that said and no rate, i gotcha ur back! lol
5/5 always
Kate~