Very nice poem , i like it very much, ur poem touch me fro the title maybe coz it's really takes a part from my life. good work and good luck .

This is well brought up poem. full of pain and sadness with in the heart. the twist ending of him cheating was not expected at all. great write letty. SO many girls out there.. even some guys can relate to the pain with in your words. very heart felt. great work

It's a great poem where I can feel the sadness in your words. The flow of the poem is good.

I mean it's great in terms of how it's written. I think a sweet lady like you should have never been the victim of a guy who cheated on you. Cheaters don't deserve to live period. They bring pain to the women they hurt...and this is evident on the WAY you express your words in here.

Take care, and remember to keep your mind on positiveness within your life. But you still make a good poet even when you turn negativity into a poem.

You deserve one of these after I read this poem. *small hug for you*