Its sad to have a dear one dead and because of a war but remember:
we all will die one day so its an honor that he died defending his country

may Allah rest his soul insdie the heaven

Amen

The blood of a poets broken heart shows up well on the white page with words that show the cracks and depths of that wounded heart. Keep up the good works.

Mashallah you work is amazing
I love the fact that you use things that had happened to you in your life wich makes the poem much more meanning ful and pashanet
sunnah