Wow ally. this is great. the last stanza is my absolute favorite. i love it.
.5/5.

great job&&keep it up.
much love,
mac.<3
[.just.another.silly.teenage.girl.]

Very strong poem .. and it truly says how you're feeling !
I like the last verse :).

I can really relate to this. Nice piece 5/5

YOU GO GIRL!

YOU GO GIRL!

YOU GO GIRL!

Nice poem..touched my soul..!

5/5.

The end was awesome!
"You don't usually try this hard
To get the girl you desire.
Too bad we'd never work
Its a shame you're a liar."

LOVEEEE IT!! :)