Wow this piece is beautifully written. it seems like it came straight from the heart. i applaud you for an amazing poem. i would really appreciate it if you would read my poem:
Marionettes, puppets, and manikins galore.
please comment and rate if you like it. thanks
5/5 on yours btw :)

This is really funny too.
I love the humour in your poetry. It's definitely something we need to see more of on this site.
Congratulations =)
5/5.

The last stanza got me laughing. I like it though. It shows the most felt emotions of our society. Hating their job.

5/5
Keep Writting, You're fantastic

-Ally