Ouch. i loved this poem! haha i said ouch because i know exactly how it is... the way you wrote it was amazing. so much emotion and heart with in this piece. great work dear.

only thing i can suggest is go through all your pieces and get rid of the punctuation marks that have replaces your ... . , ' ; ... it will give more entusiasum to your poetry.

Awe, this is sad n sweet
good job on it
nice poem

n thanks for ur comment on mine

Very nice write, I loved the flow of this. Your wording was great. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe