I really loved this poem. the changes in weather set the mood perfect, showed the feelings that should be portrayed with in the stanzas. great work on that part. your flow was almost perfect. but one thing i would change.

I was so happy� close to foolness�
i would change to
i was so happy... close to foolishness.

and you copied it from word. so i would go to edit to get rid of the �marks. just delete them and put in the punctuation that is supposed to be there.

great work dear.