Wow, this has got 2 be ur best yet! so much feeling and really makes u think! 10/5! :)
xoxo
~waiting~

This is soooo good!! i just love the way you express everything!! great job (yet again) lol nice!! xx

Hey u commented on one of my poems n u told me 2 read this one. its reely good! i love it! i no exactly how you feel. wen i c this guy i like, i get nervous, but at the same time i'm calm bcuz hes my frend. when i look into his eyes and read the expression on his face, it kills me if he's down. reading this poem is like reading my own thoughts. great job!

HOlY...wow. wut do i say to that? that was, in all honesty, the best thing (book, article, poem, ect.) I have ever read. 5/5

Wow this is really good.
Great job...
haha yes i hate poetry rulles as well xD
ne ways keep up the good work.
-two thumbs up- 7/5 xD

Wow. amazing. seriously. i felt like i was looking into the fire as i read it, couldn't tear my eyes away. i know how it feels to look at someone that way and watn to tear your eyes away, but not being able to...thanks so much

That was awesome. the guy i like has me caught in a trance and i understand everything!

Thts really good

i like ur use of language

keep up da good work xx

Im moved. 5/5

Loved the imagery in this piece. wow ur good! i wish i could write like this lol.

"I'm staring in the fire
all the emotions that arise
I'm staring in the fire
and the fire is in your eyes"

perfectly worded. truthfully!