" here "should be "her ". first stanza.

having someone to accept us like we are , and se the beauty we are. is very rare in tehse days where everyone care about looks adn money. first loves are true , but from my experience they are not ever lasting .

i loved the structure of your poem , and the natural composition of the causes.

it si a good free verse one , keep it up

and welcome to our club ^_^

We're all remember vividly our first love , but as 'Moucha aka loverboy' said ; the majority of our 1st love stories dont last forever .
Nice poem & good way of expressing ur feelings 5/5
good job