This is a good poem. The flow was great. Although, the structure wasn't that good. Maybe try putting it into stanzas. It's good though. The imagery was good.

.:CiNdY:.

Love this poem, rymes very well 5/5

check out some of mine when you've got time.

Well written... two described two different nature so beautifully...

the ending is superb..

good job..

keep writing...

I think that it might be better if you put this poem into stanzas, but then again, that's just a personal preference. lol I liked how it changed from happy to angry every few lines. That was cool.