Comments : I'm Dying

  • 16 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    Ok, this one is my favorite of yours so far. I'm going to put it on my faves list. The storyline is beautiful. I assume you meant break in the 3rd line but other than that, this poem is awesome. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by thememorythathurts

    Kool kool i like this one
    soo keep up the good work :p
    5/5