Beautifuly written. You expressed it perfectly. Good rhymes and rhythm. One of the best I've read so far. 5/5

Great flow. This is a wonderful piece. I've noticed that most of your poems have a twisted sentimental piecing to it. It's nice to see. keep it up 5/5
kat

Thank you. they do have a twist in them. to kind of show what happens in the beggining to end. it helps show what ive gone through or am goin through