Comments : Is it over

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wow, i liked it very much very lovely

    "Are our times of heart break and searching for the one over?
    could you be the one i kiss forever?
    and say i love you every day and every night for the rest of my life?"
    ^
    wonderful start

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Again, great flow... i love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by A Good Man

    I know where ur coming from on this.
    I went through something like that when I used to have a girl.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sander

    Wow, very nice poem! I really like it! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Arun Khan

    Really nice poem... I'll pm you with tips ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    This is nice, short but a great work, i love the flow and the questions, i guess everybody ask themselves those at one time in life, great work, keep it up.