This poem is well-written and has a slight touch of drama in a positive sense.

Your flow is flawless.
This really reminds me of a love poem I was trying to write; I think it would have been more interesting if you wrote a fantasy in your head and then at the end say something along the lines of oh it was just a daydream and then mention about the future. Personally now I like to use some mysetry and surprise when writting love pieces; like, "Star-Crossed Lovers" would be my main example. It's still a great poem though in my opinion.

I love this poeme