This poem is absolutely breath taking
i cant believe people havent commented on this poem yet
its so descriptive and amazing detail
loved the iamgery and the ending of the poem just got me feeling happy.
loved it
Never give up writing because you have a great gift
take care
Lisa

Love the tilte of this poem and the poem is great

Love the imagery and the leap you took to approach certain topics. Great movement, They all had a sort of transition that flowed with the next idea. Very unique!

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