I love the poem, 5/5

Excellent was the vote!!! I like your words here, nice! Just the right pace and flow. Good job. Keep up the good writing.

Islands of light in the green and the blue,
Wave upon wave of kaleidoscope hues.

John,

These were my favorite lines. You painted a very vivid picture her and I loved the imagery.

Take care,
5/5 Ingrid

Beautiful....and beautifully graphic....

John I love the entire poem. The imagery was beautiful. Crashing indeed was my heart when I read this. Such beautiful words chose by such a talentedpoet.

But those that fell to the welcoming sea
Shone as floodlights for all to see,
Islands of light in the green and the blue,
Wave upon wave of kaleidoscope hues.
^^^
Amazing imagery in this stanza John!
"kaleidoscope hues" .... excellent word choice

Wonderful read
Luanne