Tht was gd poem a bit confusing but nice xxx

I like it! It comes across in different emotions, just like the true mind,for when theres commotion of the heart, the mind acts out in every part...well done

Very good write =)
The flow in this poem was wonderful and your display of emotion throughout the entire was perfectly portrayed.

"I keep writing, writing of you, writing of me, my thought someday will end but my words last for eternity."
^^my fav part

Overall, perfectly and beautifully written
5/5