Comments : Lack of Systems.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I like your words here, nice! Just the right pace and flow. Good job. Keep up the good writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, wow, I am literally speechless, you have so powerful message in this poem, truly fantastic topic and I can't agree more.
    Beauty in this poem is huge and you created so original and vivid imagery.
    This is the best nature poem I read in a long time, it kept my attention and every description is somehow flawless! You have brilliant wording, well done!