Comments : Revolution

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Powerful from the first to the last line, very deep and original. I like the flow of the whole piece and the topic is excellent.
    My favorite stanza is:

    - Dream a dream,
    Laugh a laugh,
    Scream a scream,
    Overlook the aftermath,-
    ^^
    So unique, truly amazing.

    Whole poem is greatly written. I like the message of the piece, you truly portrayed it on a good way.
    The ending stanza is fantastic conclusion for the whole poem, truly effective.
    Keep up!