Comments : Trying so hard

  • 15 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Hey, i can feel you completely
    "All I want is to get out, I wanna break free,
    I wanna leave and never come back,
    I wanna make a new me,
    A me, without you"

    excellent

  • 15 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    This poem is really so strong although u wrote it in few words ,it was touchable...I do like it so much..keep it up:)
    By the way U got a nice name Zeinab
    Take care..