Nice job, keep it up :]

You are amazing! This is another beautiful, touching, emotional poem. What amazes me the most is your vocabulary. For one so young you have an exceptional knowledge of vocabulary. I loved the imagery and the flow was once again flawless. Reading your poetry puts most of mine to shame. LOL. From what I have read of yours it seems to me that you have a very bright future ahead of you. I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep writing!

Letty