Comments : The truth

  • 16 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    "It's just another day that passes by
    With those who are scared get stepped on
    And those who are not gain it all"

    I don't understand these lines at all. But I do like the fairytale analogy you've used, even though I think you steered away from that theme too soon. Still, I get the feeling you really put your heart into this piece, and it was not disappointing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    I wanted to talk about those who are scared to take risks of falling in love they get passed by as if they are invisible you know as if no one notices them anymore because they are scared of just exposing themselves to love since it could cause heartache, but those who do take a step forward and take the risk they get something always even if it was just pain, at least they are feeling something not living in denial.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    Thanks for taking the time to explain. I see now that my misunderstanding is (and I mean no offence) more down to your use of grammar. You are right that there are too many people living in denial and equally there are millions too weak of will and short of confidence to step up to the plate and stop love passing them by.