Very nice. I can hear so much hope and longing in your verse.

I agree too, I like this.

I can so relate to this =) good job ^_^

You sound like you'd like to be more than just friends, Cute poem

Grant

Ahhhhhhhh the friends zone, i hate it!!
haha well done bit short but very well written!!
xx

Alot of men and women can relate to this 'just friends' business. Written well with alot of emotion & thought put into the piece. 5/5, Em

So emotional poem , i love it
well done 5/5