Comments : Afraid Of Goodbye

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    I thought this was a very beautiful poem. It was short, sweet, sad, and simple. You did a great job capturing the emotions in this piece. The only thing I have to suggest is making your poem more professional looking. For example:

    "Do you realize how much you mean to me?
    Maybe one day you'll finally see....
    I love you.
    My only wish before i go,
    Is that you say it too."

    You did a great job though, nontheless sweetheart. Take care and keep up the awesome work! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    The blood of a poets broken heart shows up well on the white page with words that show the cracks and depths of that wounded heart. Keep up the good works.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristen

    I love it,
    i completely relate to it
    except its kinda opposite for me
    but i really like it ! well written!

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Hard to love someone that just can't love you back. I know how it feels. Well portrayed, 5/5. Em