I guess i got sick;

sick of choking on the things he told me,
and sick of causing my own brain decay,
by trying to figure out why he said it.

I'm a little bigger now,
a little bit stronger too,
i don't like what you made me,
so yeah, i'm done with you!

So this is the infamous love of a teenager girl?

head in the pillow, crying over everything that he said..

& she didn't say.

I look into your eyes.
baby this is what they call:

thatcrazykindateenagerlovewitharomeoandjullietkindatwist

:]

Pen to paper,
<3 skips a beat,

its ten to the dozen,
as you sweep me of my feet

& pumpkin, next time its gonna hurt a hole lot more x

HeWasTheBiggestPlayaInTown,
TheOneThatMadeTheGirlsCry,

ButToMeHeWasTheOnlyFishIWanted,
&&TheOnlyLionUCouldn't tame

SheStaredAtHimIn
TearsAndWhispered;

Whats it like to feel
the way you make me feel?

That little jar of broken hearts, you keep locked under your bed.
well baby, you got what you wanted, mines in it now

</3

I know everyone hates this.
but could i get some critical comments on
' the green, green grass of Ireland'

its for my boyfriend for v'day and it would help. he's never read any of my poems.