IF My MUSiC'S T00 L0UD;;
y0U'RE T00 0LD

I'D RATHER SPEND 0NE MiNUTE H0LDiNG y0U
THEN SPENDiNG My WH0LE LiFE KN0WiNG
i NEVER C0ULD

Please comment on my poem Christmas shoes.
if you have a heart no matter what realigon you are you will be touched by this poem
thank you
cindy

Sometimes in life you have to learn
not to depend on anyone && always
remember that you're your own best
friend, and your own worst enemy

Sometimes you act like your supposed
to love me, not as if you actually mean it..

Alot of times you will find a boy who says
he wont hurt you;;but he ends up being
the one that hurts you the most

No camara could ever capture the look in her eyes &
the feeling in her heart when she`s looking at him

&& she looks at him with tears in her eyes and quietLy says to herself " how did ii lose him..i miss him..just look at himn love HER

&& every night she dreams of what if .. we stayed together?

I BITE MY TONGUE EVERY TIEM YOU COME AROUND ; BECAUSE BLOOD IN MY MOUTH IS BETTER THAN TEARS ON THE GROUND